- I have described the setting of my story using interesting adjectives
- My character does an action of some sort - something happens
- My character speaks (reacts to what has happened)
- I have shown how the character feels through their movements, reactions
- and body language
- Have written a cliffhanger or rhetorical question to finish the paragraph.
The most challenging thing is to use more words.
My next step is to be faster.
2 comments:
wish you better and better
Flora, This is a wonderful paragraph. It has an intriguing introduction, powerful adjectives and an exciting simile.
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